Don't write to the rhyme, it will make you a liar.

If you find yourself working a line for the sake of the rhyme, you will abandon the truth and honesty about the point your making. Better to break structure, or change the rhyme scheme in order to be conversational.

Correct the Man and Glorify The Women.

I call these "Let me back in the house songs". This is a good formula to use. When a man admits his mistakes and in turn, realizes what a great women he has, we can't help but pull for this guy. I wouldn't go as far as having him be cheater...this is the unforgivable sin, but not being attentive enough , or just being a typical guy, we can pull for this character to get it right......bd

Hey to all.... Jim had a good idea to use the Forum as a way to send me your songs. The only problem is i can't open a .wma file on my mac so make sure it is a .mp3 file. I will be on the writers block most of the day today, getting familiar with the site tools, and reading lyrics, and listening to songs, and visiting all the members sites, getting familiar with your work......bd

I am having a bit of trouble uploading my demo songs to my page so I will just post a link to my player till i get the kinks worked through...hope yall enjoy what you hear..feedback is welcome good or bad lol..hope to hear from ya soon ttys,luv,Sonja=;~}.....p.s. so what do you think??http://music.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=music.singleplaylist&friendid=307825553

Hey to all this is Billy. The songs I am hearing so far, are not very commercial, and thats Ok. I will mostly focus on structure, originality, melody for these types of songs. I'm going to try and find songs that are close to being a hit song. The goal, I think, for writers, is to make money writing songs. I can be your link to the music industry to get your songs heard, but I must warn you... I set the bar very high!!! I am working out my schedule to create a regular set time every week to chat… Continue